Okay. This time it only took me a bit more than 3 hours. Still lousy paper (Shops all closed here - too impatient to wait for online order delivery) - better pens.
There are two lines in the sleeve part, that shouldn't be there. (0-4 and the outer sleeve head, where I missed point 8 with the hand tool) The green wobbly lines are my visual aid where seam allowances should be.
Shoulders look way better now, as does the cross in the arm hole.
Still: Sleeve hem seems odd. Double checked the 95° angle.
So, what do you all think? Third time's a charm - or will the 2nd one suffice?